based on the feedback given I need to improve:
I am going to retake all the pictures with the correct band members and with better framing and mise en scene
take more inspiration from other magazines of similar genre
I am going to improve the layout of both my contents page and double page spread
correct text errors in double page spread
make the double page spread fit the genre style
make it known whos telling the questions and whos answering them
have models that are dressed and look more related to the genre of the magazine
keep to about three fonts
have a quote from the band or article on the dps
avoid using yellow fonts make it easier to read
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